Question

8．你的好友Jane給你發(fā)來求助信，向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日心情不好，特別容易發(fā)脾氣，正常的學習和生活受到了影響．請用英文給該同學寫一封回信．內(nèi)容要點如下：
1．表示理解：人人都會有不開心、發(fā)脾氣的時候，不必太苦惱；
2．提出建議：可以向朋友或父母傾訴；鍛煉排解郁悶；學會控制脾氣，發(fā)脾氣前保持沉默一會兒…

注意：
1．信的內(nèi)容須包括所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮；
2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關的信息；
3．詞數(shù)80左右，信的開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：worry苦惱； advice； keep silent保持沉默； lose one's temper 發(fā)脾氣
Dear Jane，
I'm sorry to know that you're worried now．Everyone has             I hope you'll soon feel calm and become happy．
Yours，
Ann．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Second，go outdoors and play sports with your friends．第二，和你的朋友一起去戶外運動．
go outdoors 去戶外
 play sth with sb 和某人一起玩
句型二：
Keep silent for a few minutes to make yourself calmer before you want to lose your temper next time．在你下次發(fā)脾氣之前保持沉默幾分鐘，讓自己平靜下來．
Keep silent for a few minutes 保持沉默幾分鐘
make sb calmer使某人平靜下來
lose one's temper發(fā)脾氣

解答 Dear Jane，
I'm sorry to know that you're worried now．Everyone has this feeling sometimes，so you don't have to worry much．（人人都會有不開心、發(fā)脾氣的時候，不必太苦惱）Here is my advice：
First，try to talk to someone，such as your parents or friends．（向朋友或父母傾訴）Maybe that can make you feel better．Second，go outdoors and play sports with your friends．【高分句型一】This way can help you become calm and relaxed．（鍛煉排解郁悶）And third，learn to control your temper．Keep silent for a few minutes to make yourself calmer before you want to lose your temper next time．【高分句型二】（學會控制脾氣）I hope you'll soon feel calm and become happy．（希望）
Yours，
Ann

點評 能夠根據(jù)提示進行書面表達，能夠圍繞主題準確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達自己的思想，進而完成寫作任務．