Question

【題目】個人的成長離不開他人的支持。請結(jié)合下面的提示詞，以“People Who Help Me”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。分別談?wù)劺蠋煛⒓胰思芭笥言�在哪些方面給予你關(guān)心和幫助，你將怎樣回報他們。

要求：1.條理清楚，書寫工整，句式規(guī)范，標(biāo)點符號和大小寫使用正確。

2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名。文章開頭已給出，不計入單詞總數(shù)。

3.提示詞語： care for，knowledge， encourage， support， difficulty， in the future， study harder(提示詞不必全部用上)。People Who Help me

During these years， I have got lots of help from my parents， teachers and friends.

Answer 1

【答案】

People Who Help me

During these years， I have got lots of help from my parents， teachers and friends. When I was crazy about playing computer games， my parents didn’t blame me. They didn’t give up helping me， but they still cared for my study and life.When I had difficulty in my study， my teachers taught me much knowledge patiently. When I couldn’t get on well with others， my good friends gave me support and encourage.

In the future， I should never forget the help that they have given to me. At present， I should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料的話題作文。主要內(nèi)容要包括來自于家人、老師和朋友三方面的幫助；并要表達(dá)自己自己怎樣做來回報他們。在描述三方面的幫助時，根據(jù)需要可用過去時態(tài)，在描寫自己將來怎么做時，可以用I want, I should, I will,等句式。

寫作說明：這篇短文包含了所有要點， 能圍繞內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容具體、豐富。應(yīng)用了較豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，如：When I was crazy about playing computer games， my parents didn’t blame me，but they still cared for…, get on well with, I should never forget the help that they have given to me., At present，等。用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚。