Question

【題目】語篇表達（共15分）

“百善孝為先”，“身教勝于言傳”。請根據(jù)所提供的信息與提示詞，以“What my father does moves me deeply!”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。

內(nèi)容要點：

1. 奶奶把爸爸撫養(yǎng)大不容易，現(xiàn)在年齡大了，很需要照顧；

2. 爸爸是個孝順的兒子。無論他多忙，他……；

3. 孝敬老人是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，爸爸所做的為我樹立了好榜樣；

4. 我要向爸爸學(xué)習(xí)，并盡我所能和家人一起分擔(dān)家務(wù)。

提示詞：raise(撫養(yǎng))，filial(孝順的)，set an example to(為……樹立榜樣)，virtue(美德)，respecting elderly people(孝敬老人)

寫作要求：

1.短文必須陳述以上四個方面的內(nèi)容，其中第二方面至少寫出體現(xiàn)父親孝心的三件事；

2. 所給的提示詞都必須用上（可適當發(fā)揮），詞數(shù)不少于80詞（不含已給出的句子的詞數(shù)）；

3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真空的姓名、校名和地名；

4. 語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。

What my father does moves me deeply

Look at the picture, my father is washing feet for my grandma. What my father is doing moves me very much. Yes, it’s not easy

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Answer 1

【答案】

What my father does moves me deeply

Look at the picture, my father is washing feet for my grandma. What my father is doing moves me very much.

Yes, it’s not easy for my grandma to raise my father and now she is too old to look after herself. My father is a filial son. No matter how busy he is, he always spends some time with my grandma every day. He usually talks with my grandma, helps her do some chores and helps her wash feet every evening.

Respecting elderly people is virtue of Chinese and my father sets an example to me. I will learn from my father and try as possibly as I can to share housework with my family.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求根據(jù)所提示的內(nèi)容要點，結(jié)合圖片上的信息及詞語提示，以“What my father does moves me deeply”（父親的行為深深地感動了我）為題，以“百善孝為先”，“身教勝于言傳”為主題進行寫作。短文重點寫爸爸如何當好孝順的兒子，如何樹立好的榜樣以突出主題。短文用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一、三人稱形式。

寫作亮點：短文開頭從看圖著筆，直奔主題：What my father is doing moves me very much.父親的行為使我深受感動。第二段先寫奶奶的不易，再寫父親是如何地孝順。條理清晰，層次清楚。其中的too…to…,no matter how等等結(jié)構(gòu)用得很好。第三段點明主題，孝敬老人是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，我要向爸爸學(xué)習(xí)。中心突出，主題鮮明。