Question

【題目】寫作。請根據(jù)以下表格信息，介紹著名影星Jackie Chan。

姓名	成龍(Jackie Chan)
出生	1954年4月7日，香港
演藝經(jīng)歷	很小的時(shí)候就開始練習(xí)功夫; 迄今為止參演過一百多部功夫片。1978年由他主演的電影“Drunken Master”獲得巨大成功，這標(biāo)志著他成功事業(yè)的開始;
社會(huì)活動(dòng)	成龍是一個(gè)心地善良的人，他致力于救助有需要的人，還經(jīng)常捐錢給慈善機(jī)構(gòu)；
你的評(píng)價(jià)	成龍被認(rèn)為是亞洲最受歡迎的男演員之一，我希望他的演技會(huì)更出色。

參考詞匯：kind-hearted 心地善良的

Jackie Chan is one of our favourite film stars. He is famous not only in China, but also in other parts of the world.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Jackie Chan is one of our favourite film stars. He is famous not only in China, but also in other parts of the world.

He was born in Hong Kong on 7 April 1954. At a very young age, he began to practise kung fu. So far, he has acted in more than 100 action films. In 1978, he played the lead role in the film Drunken Master and it was a great success. This marked the beginning of his successful career.

Jackie Chan is a kind-hearted person. He devotes himself to helping people in need. He often donates money to charities.

Jackie Chan is considered as one of the most popular Asian actors. I hope his acting skills will be better in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己最喜歡的影星成龍。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述，表述時(shí)應(yīng)注意全面，盡量將每個(gè)要點(diǎn)包括。注意主謂一致問題。句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。千萬不能翻譯成漢語式的英語。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文，緊扣題材，用了所給材料的要點(diǎn)，使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如: be born in出生在……；give up放棄；連詞but但是等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，讓文章更出彩，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。