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15．請你根據(jù)提示，針對環(huán)境污染日益嚴重的現(xiàn)狀寫一篇不少于80詞的短文，呼吁大家保護環(huán)境，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
現(xiàn)狀：1．大量的樹木被砍伐，森林愈來愈少．
2．工廠排放污水，河流污染愈來愈嚴重．
3．浪費現(xiàn)象嚴重．
做法：1．多種樹，減少一次性筷子的使用．
2．呼吁停止向河流排放污水．
3．如果能修理，就不要扔掉還能用的東西．
As we all know，our environment becomes worse and worse．Lots of trees are cut down，so we have fewer and fewer forests．Many factories pour dirty water into the rivers，which makes the pollution more and more serious．And people throw away many things that can be used for a long time．All of these do harm to our environment．So we must do something to protect our environment．First，we should plant more trees and had better not use disposable chopsticks．Second，we should stop the factories from polluting the rivers．What's more，we'd better reuse the things instead of throwing them away if they can be fixed．．

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分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是針對環(huán)境污染日益嚴重的現(xiàn)狀談?wù)劚Ｗo環(huán)境的一些做法．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
一現(xiàn)狀：1．大量的樹木被砍伐，森林愈來愈少．
2．工廠排放污水，河流污染愈來愈嚴重．
3．浪費現(xiàn)象嚴重．
二做法：1．多種樹，減少一次性筷子的使用．
2．呼吁停止向河流排放污水．
3．如果能修理，就不要扔掉還能用的東西．
常用到的重點短語：
cut down 砍倒
pour…into…把…倒入…
throw away 扔掉
do harm to 對…不利
had better do sth 最好做某事
stop sb from doing sth 阻止某人做某事
instead of 而不是
【高分句型】
1．Many factories ①pour dirty water into the rivers，②which③makes the pollution④more and more serious．
①pour…into…把…倒入…
②which作為關(guān)系詞的非限制性定語從句．
③make sth adj 讓某物怎么樣
④比較級+and+比較級  越來越…
2．①What's more，②we'd better reuse the things ③instead of ④throwing them away⑤if they can be fixed．
①what's more再者
②had better do sth 最好做某事
③instead of 而不是，后跟動名詞
④throw away 扔掉
⑤if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，其中can be fixed是情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)：情態(tài)動詞+be+過去分詞．

解答 As we all know，our environment becomes worse and worse．Lots of trees are cut down，so we have fewer and fewer forests．（大量的樹木被砍伐，森林愈來愈少．）Many factories pour dirty water into the rivers，which makes the pollution more and more serious．【高分句型】（工廠排放污水，河流污染愈來愈嚴重）And people throw away many things that can be used for a long time．（浪費現(xiàn)象嚴重）All of these do harm to our environment．So we must do something to protect our environment．First，we should plant more trees and had better not use disposable chopsticks．（多種樹，減少一次性筷子的使用）Second，we should stop the factories from polluting the rivers．（呼吁停止向河流排放污水）What's more，we'd better reuse the things instead of throwing them away if they can be fixed．【高分句型】（如果能修理，就不要扔掉還能用的東西）

點評 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上．語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．