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8．假如你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專欄的小記者，上周日參加了學(xué)校為迎接世界環(huán)境日組織的遠(yuǎn)足活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你給校報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道．

活動(dòng)情況	活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)	北海公園
	參與人員	七年級(jí)全體師生
	活動(dòng)內(nèi)容	上午：環(huán)保（environmental protection）演講比賽 下午：自由活動(dòng)（唱歌、游戲、放風(fēng)箏…）
活動(dòng)評(píng)價(jià)	…

要求：
1．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括提供的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．語(yǔ)意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；
4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息．
Last Sunday was a sunny day．Our school organized a hiking to greet World Environment Day．All the Grade 7 students and teachers took part in the activity in Beihai Park．
In the morning，we had a speech competition on environmental protection．The speakers talked a lot about protecting environment，like saving water，reducing air pollution．In the afternoon，we did what we like．We sang and played games together．Some of us enjoyed flying kites．Some volunteered to pick up rubbish in the park．
It's a meaningful and exciting day．We've realized it's our duty to help protect the environment．We had a lot of fun the whole day．I hope more activities like this will be organized in our school．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是報(bào)道上周日參加的學(xué)校為迎接世界環(huán)境日組織的遠(yuǎn)足活動(dòng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一，三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．活動(dòng)情況；①活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)：北海公園 
 ②參與人員：七年級(jí)全體師生
③活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：上午：環(huán)保演講比賽
下午：自由活動(dòng)（唱歌、游戲、放風(fēng)箏…）
2． 活動(dòng)評(píng)價(jià)
 
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
take part in 參加
pick up 撿起
talk about 討論

【高分句型】
1．In the afternoon，we did what we like．
did后接what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．
2．We've realized①②it's our duty to help protect the environment．
①realize接省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②it's one's duty to do sth 做某事是某人的職責(zé)．it做形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．
3．I hope ①more activities ②like this③will be organized in our school．
①hope后接省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②like this做后置定語(yǔ)，修飾前面的activities．
③一般將來(lái)時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)will+be+過(guò)去分詞，主語(yǔ)more activities是動(dòng)詞organize的承受者，構(gòu)成被動(dòng)關(guān)系，用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)．

解答 Last Sunday．was a sunny day．Our school organized a hiking to greet World Environment Day．All the Grade 7 students and teachers took part in the activity in Beihai Park．（活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)：北海公園 ）（參與人員：七年級(jí)全體師生）
     In the morning，we had a speech competition on environmental protection．The speakers talked a lot about protecting environment，like saving water，reducing air pollution．（上午：環(huán)保演講比賽）In the afternoon，we did what we like．【高分句型】We sang and played games together．Some of us enjoyed flying kites．Some volunteered to pick up rubbish in the park．（下午：自由活動(dòng)）
    It's a meaningful and exciting day．We've realized it's our duty to help protect the environment．【高分句型】We had a lot of fun the whole day．I hope more activities like this will be organized in our school．【高分句型】（活動(dòng)評(píng)價(jià)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文．本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭．我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題．寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．