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18．"友誼的小船說(shuō)翻就翻"是最近主流社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)上流行的網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言，看后同學(xué)們有何感想？相信同學(xué)們都有自己的朋友，如何使"友誼的小船不會(huì)說(shuō)翻就翻"？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的寫(xiě)作要求，寫(xiě)一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />內(nèi)容包括：
1 我們?yōu)槭裁葱枰�朋友�?我們?cè)撊绾闻c朋友相處？（兩點(diǎn)建議）
3 呼吁同學(xué)們與朋友和睦共處．
作文要求：
1 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名．
2 語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80詞左右．作文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，也不必抄寫(xiě)在答題卡上．
Almost everyone in the world has friends．How can we make our friendship last forever？              ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：In my opinion，it's nice to have friends because we can talk，laugh and do things together在我看來(lái)，很高興有朋友，因?yàn)槲覀兛梢哉f(shuō)話，笑和一起做事情．in one's opinion是一個(gè)固定短語(yǔ)，在某人看來(lái)；后面是一個(gè)由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
高分句型二：It's said that people who have friends are happier than those who don't據(jù)說(shuō)有朋友的人比沒(méi)有朋友的人要快樂(lè)．It's said that是一個(gè)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的固定句式，意思是，據(jù)說(shuō)…；后面是一個(gè)由who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是people．

解答 In my opinion，it's nice to have friends because we can talk，laugh and do things together（高分句型一：開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)）．It's said that people who have friends are happier than those who don't（高分句型二：說(shuō)明為什么需要朋友）．Nowadays，many people want to know how to make friendship last forever．Here are my suggestions．First，we should be kind to our friends．When friends are in trouble，we should try our best to help them．Second，we must try to understand each other and think of others more than ourselves．（作者的建議）Friendship is a kind of treasure．We must get on well with friends．（得出結(jié)論）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要盡量使用高分單詞，短語(yǔ)和句子，句式，以便為文章增色．