Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）

孟子曰：“不以規(guī)矩，不成方圓”。家規(guī)體現(xiàn)著家人的價(jià)值追求和傳承，也是社會風(fēng)氣、公民道德的源頭。請根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容的提示, 以“My family rules”為題，寫一篇短文。

My family rules
The importance	behave properly be good for our growth (成長)
What rules	be honest and polite do some housework …
Influence on me	…

注意：

1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3. 詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

My family rules

Most families have some rules for children to follow.

Answer 1

【答案】

Most families have some rules for children to follow. Family rules are good for our growth. We can also know how to behave properly both at home and at school with the help of these rules.

There are some rules in my family. First of all, I am told to be honest and polite at any time. Second, I should be grateful to others for their help. My parents often tell me not to forget those people who once gave me help. Last but not the least, I am asked to do some housework when I am free.

My family rules are a good influence on me. I always tell the truth, so my classmates all trust me. I often help my friends in need. At weekends, I also do some cleaning to make my parents happy and relaxed.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如We can also know how to behave properly both at home and at school with the help of these rules.等等。