Question

Jack是一名九年級(jí)的學(xué)生，最近迷上手機(jī)游戲，經(jīng)常玩到深夜，睡眠不足，不能認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講，導(dǎo)致成績(jī)下降。媽媽很生氣，不再讓他使用手機(jī)。假如你是他的朋友Tina，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封信給他，建議他要合理使用手機(jī)，如查閱資料，記單詞等。同時(shí)，考試在即，要理解父母、老師的心情，要主動(dòng)去溝通，得到他們的原諒和幫助。
要求：
包含所給要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言流暢，意思連貫，適當(dāng)拓展；詞數(shù)80詞左右；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：become poor in study; get angry with ; communicate with; forgive.
Dear Jack，
I am sorry to hear that you quarreled with your parents about playing mobile phone games.
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
Yours，

Answer 1

Dear Jack，
I am sorry to hear that you quarrelled with your parents about playing mobile phone games.
You spent so much time playing games that you forgot when to sleep and you felt too sleepy and tired to listen to the teachers in class the next day. Because of these, you became poor in your study. Your mother got angry with you. You felt bad about this.
Firstly, I think you should stop playing games. You can use mobile phone to search for information, and look up new words. it is a useful tool in your study.
Secondly, you need to communicate with your parents and teachers, and let them know your problems. They will help you. at the same time ,they will forgive you for your mistakes.
I hope my suggestions are of great value to you.
Yours，
Tina

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