Question

16．假如你是李明，你的英國(guó)筆友Mike 想和你交流有關(guān)"hobby"的問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)你給Mike
回郵件，回答他提出的問(wèn)題．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think you can get a lot from doing sports我認(rèn)為做運(yùn)動(dòng)你會(huì)很快樂(lè)．
think后是省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型二】
if you do sports，you'll feel relaxed and happy如果你做運(yùn)動(dòng)，你會(huì)感到放松和快樂(lè)．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．

解答 Dear Mike，
Glad to hear from you again!In your letter you told me you wanted to develop a hobby and you needed my advice．Just as you know，many people have hobbies，so do my classmates．Some of them are interested in relaxing hobbies，such as reading，painting and listening to music，others enjoy active hobbies like swimming and playing basketball．（同學(xué)們會(huì)有什么樣的愛(ài)好）
In my opinion，active hobbies are good choices for you．You usually spend too much time studying and sitting for too long time．So you'd better take some sports to keep fit，such as swimming，running and playing basketball．I think you can get a lot from doing sports．【高分句型一】．（建議，培養(yǎng)哪種愛(ài)好）First of all，if you do sports，you'll feel relaxed and happy．【高分句型二】Also，you can make friends when you do sports．（能帶來(lái)什么）
Wish my advice could give you some help．
Yours，
Li Ming

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