Question

【題目】書面表達

假設Kangkang是你的新朋友,請以My New Friend為題, 根據(jù)表格內(nèi)提示的內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文, 介紹一下他，開頭已給出。

要求：1. 語句通順，條理清楚，可適當發(fā)揮；

2. 不少于60詞。

Name	Kangkang
Age	12
From	Fuzhou, China
Looks	round face, big eyes, tall and strong
Clothes	yellow T-shirt, black pants, white shoes
Favorite actor	Bruce Lee
Father	a worker, in an office
Mother	a teacher, in a school

I have a new friend.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My New Friend

I have a new friend. His name is Kang Kang. He is twelve years old. He is from Fuzhou ,China. He has a round face and big eyes. He is tall and strong. He is in a yellow T-shirt, black pants and white shoes. His favorite actor is Bruce Lee. His father is a worker in an office. His mother is a teacher in a school. He has a happy family.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的新朋友康康。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：His name is…， He is…, He has…, His favorite actor is…,His mother is等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，寫作中要完整地表達出提綱中所要求內(nèi)容。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的新朋友的名字，接下來介紹他的長相和穿著，最后介紹他有一個幸福的家庭。此處be from, a round face, in a yellow T-shirt, in an office, in a school等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。