Question

15．你聽說過Earth Hour這項活動嗎？今年的Earth Hour你中如何度過的？請你寫一篇題為"My Earth Hour 2011"的短文．
內容包括：
1．你今年參加Earth Hour這個活動了嗎？請表達你參加或者沒有參加的心情．
2．請描述你當時在哪里，與誰一起度過，做了什么事．
3．請列舉兩件以上你在日常生活中經(jīng)常做的有利于環(huán)保的事．
4．號召大家加入到明年的Earth Hour活動中來．
作文要求：
1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱和學生的真實姓名．
2．語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右．作文的標題、開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，也不必抄寫在答題卡上．My Earth Hour 2011
The Earth Hour was from 8：30pm to 9：30pm on Saturday，March 26^th this year．
It was the moment my friends and I waited for a long time．We talked and played games at home with all the lights off．We were glad to be in the Earth Hour．
As a student，I have done lots of things to protect the environment．For example，I always carry a cloth bag while shopping．Besides，I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car．
I think we can care for the earth by doing so．Let's take part in the Earth Hour next year．
I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文．內容為寫一篇題為"My Earth Hour 2011"的短文，描述今年的Earth Hour你是如何度過的．時態(tài)為一般過去時．人稱為第一人稱．寫作要點包括：1．今年我參加Earth Hour這個活動時間、地點和誰一起參加的；2．在日常生活中經(jīng)常做的有利于環(huán)保的事；3．號召大家加入到明年的Earth Hour活動中來．常用到的重點句型和短語：be glad to do，instead of doing，care for，take part in，from…to…等．

解答 My Earth Hour 2011
The Earth Hour was from 8：30 pm to 9：30 pm on Saturday，March 26th this year．It was the moment my friends and I waited for a long time．We talked and played games at home with all the lights off．We were glad to be in the Earth Hour．As a student，I have done lots of things to protect the environment．For example，I always carry a cloth bag while shopping．Besides，I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car．I think we can care for the earth by doing so．Let's take part in the Earth Hour next year．
I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in．

點評 這是一篇命題作文，要求考生就Earth Hour這個話題展開作文，同時給出了詳細的寫作提綱，考生可根據(jù)提綱內容展開作文，且所提示內容必須全部包括在內，由于作文的開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，降低了作文的難度，考生可集中精力在描述該項活動上，注意組織語言時符合英語的表達習慣，不要在作文中出現(xiàn)真實姓名或者校名．

與環(huán)保相關的句型和短語：
be glad to…很高興做某事     
instead of doing…而是做某事…
the more…the more…越…越…
take action to do sth 采取行動
protect the environment  保護環(huán)境
turn off the light/with the light off 關燈
carry a cloth bag 帶布袋   
ride a bike 騎車
take part in…參加    
no smoking 禁止吸煙  no litering 禁止亂扔垃圾

句型：
The global climate is getting warmer and warmer．全球氣候變暖．
I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car．我經(jīng)常踩車去學校而不是坐車．
On that day，we talk and play games at home with all the light off．在那天，我們都不開燈，在家里交談和玩游戲．
We should take action to protect our environment．我們要用實際行動保護環(huán)境．
The more we do for our environment，the better our living place will be．為保護環(huán)境做更多的事，我們生活的地方也會變得更好．