Question

【題目】【貴州省六盤水市2015年中考英語試題】閱讀使人明智，閱讀使人充實。閱讀的好處很多，但是，目前許多中學(xué)生都不重視閱讀。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇80-100字的英語短文，對這一現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行分析并提出建議。文能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。開頭已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。（15分）

內(nèi)容要點：

不重視閱讀的原因	如：1.作業(yè)太多 2.時間花在…..	參考詞匯： open up eyes, get knowledge, colorful, habit
閱讀的好處	如：1.開闊眼界，獲得知識 2.學(xué)會如何思考 3.生活更加豐富多彩
你的建議	如：養(yǎng)成良好的讀書習(xí)慣……

At present only a few students do some reading.Here are some reasons.

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Answer 1

【答案】

At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.

Some students think they have too much homework and they are busy doing it every day. Others don’t have a habit of reading. And they often spend their spare time on TV or the Internet.

However, reading has many advantages. By reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Also reading can make our life more colorful.

Here is my advice. First, teachers are supposed to give less homework to us so that we can have more time to read. Second, it’s a good idea to start a reading club, so we can learn from each other.

【解析】

試題分析：認(rèn)真閱讀題目所給信息：1. 不重視閱讀的原因 ：分兩項說明2.閱讀的好處：分三項說明 3.建議。寫作時：1. 要注意不要遺漏信息。2.要注意信息的條理性。這篇文章的話題是中學(xué)生不重視課外閱讀，這是學(xué)生熟悉，感興趣的話題，有話可說，而且通過表格列出了要點，學(xué)生要將要點寫全，寫齊。連詞成句，還要寫出自己的建議，這點要求自己發(fā)揮。寫作時要注意用些高級詞組，句型，還要有關(guān)聯(lián)詞。Besides，F(xiàn)irst ，Second,這樣文章會更流暢。

寫作亮點：本文首先指出現(xiàn)在只有少數(shù)學(xué)生課后看書，接著分析形成這種現(xiàn)象的原因。再指出經(jīng)常閱讀的重要性，最后給出了一些建議。條理清楚，層次分明。特別是文中用了be busy doing sth, spend …on…,by doing sth make sb adj,learn from等等短語和結(jié)構(gòu)，使本文表達(dá)得生動、具體、流暢。