Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)（10分）

根據(jù)以下表格提供的信息，寫一篇以“My English teacher”為題的短文。

Name: Tim Green	Favorite sport: basketball
Age:25	Favorite food: hamburgers, chicken
From: England	Favorite color: blue

My English teacher

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have a very good English teacher.My classmates and I all like him very much. His name is Tim Green。

He likes basketball best. He is 25 years old. His favorite food is hamburgers and chicken. He is from England and his favorite color is blue.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如His favorite food is hamburgers and chicken.等，and等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。