Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

最近，你隨機(jī)調(diào)查了你校50名同學(xué)的課外英語學(xué)習(xí)現(xiàn)狀（結(jié)果見下面圖表）。請(qǐng)你就此用英語寫一篇短文，在英語課上進(jìn)行匯報(bào)，談?wù)勀愕?/span>看法和建議。

注意：（1）文章必須包括圖表中四項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

（2）看法和建議至少兩條。

（3）詞數(shù)：80-100

（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how students learn English out of class.

參考詞匯：背誦recite

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

I have recently done a survey about how students learn English out of class. Almost all students read textbooks and memorize new words. They think reading textbooks is the most important for English learning. More than 40 students do some exercises. Some students review their notes they have taken in class. However, only a few students do some listening and speaking practice.

In my opinion, listening and speaking are the secrets of becoming a good language learner. We need to do lots of listening and speaking practice, such as watching English movies and listening to English songs. Also, chatting with foreigners can be helpful.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求根據(jù)調(diào)查的結(jié)果寫一份調(diào)查報(bào)告并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ê徒ㄗh。本題是有關(guān)英語學(xué)習(xí)這個(gè)話題的。短文應(yīng)包括兩個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容：一是對(duì)調(diào)查結(jié)果的描述；二是自己的看法與建議。短文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一、三人稱形式進(jìn)行表達(dá)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本范文第一段介紹的是調(diào)查結(jié)果，即對(duì)圖表內(nèi)容的描述。All, some, a few等等代詞運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)，很容易理解圖表的信息。本段中用的賓語從句，動(dòng)名詞作主語等等復(fù)雜句式的運(yùn)用，也使得本段生動(dòng)、具體。第二段由in my opinion引出作者的建議，建議的內(nèi)容主要是針對(duì)從調(diào)查結(jié)果中可以看出的，被學(xué)生忽視的英語學(xué)習(xí)的重要方面：聽和說作的建議。針對(duì)性強(qiáng)，有的放矢。本段也用到了動(dòng)名詞作主語，need to do sth, such as等等句型結(jié)構(gòu)，為本文增色不少。