Question

【題目】假如你是一名上海迪士尼樂園的志愿者,請你根據(jù)下列表格中的要點提示,用英語向孩子們介紹樂園并提醒他們文明游園。

	上海東部,地鐵可達(dá) 由6個主題公園組成 參加活動,欣賞表演 購買禮物,觀看煙火
文明游園	不扔垃圾,保持整潔 考生自擬(至少2點)

注意:

1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);

2.短文須包括所有要點,不要逐詞解釋,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;

3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

參考詞匯:theme n.主題;firework n.煙火

Good morning,children!

As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland,I’d like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.

The park is worth your visit.I hope you will have fun.

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Good morning,children!

As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland,I’d like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.

The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai.You can get there by underground.It’s made up of six theme parks.You can join in different kinds of activities there,such as enjoying wonderful musicals or plays.Also,there’re lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose.At night,you can watch fireworks.

However,it’s important to behave well in the park.Littering isn’t allowed.You should keep the park clean.Remember to wait for your turn anytime.Moreover,it’s impolite to shout loudly in public.

The park is worth your visit.I hope you will have fun.

【解析】

這是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容是向孩子們介紹樂園并提醒他們文明游園。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第二、三人稱。寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文；其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：1．樂園介紹；上海東部，地鐵可達(dá)由6個主題公園組成參加活動，欣賞表演購買禮物，觀看煙火。2．文明游園；不扔垃圾，保持整潔……常用到的重點短語：be made up of 由……組成；join in 參加；such as例如；remember to do sth 記得去做某事；in public 公共場所。高分句型1．You can join in different kinds of activities there，such as enjoying wonderful musical or plays．such as表示例如，給出事例。2．①However, ②it's important to behave well in the park.①however然后，表轉(zhuǎn)折。②it's+adj+to do sth 做某事是怎樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式是真正主語。3．①Littering②isn't allowed.①動名詞做主語謂語動詞用單數(shù)。②一般現(xiàn)在時的被動語態(tài)am/is/are+過去分詞。