Question

【題目】本學(xué)期馬上就要結(jié)束了，請你根據(jù)自己在這個學(xué)期的表現(xiàn)寫一份總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩π聦W(xué)期的規(guī)劃。

提示:

要求:

1. 參考提示要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使內(nèi)容更加充實;

2. 語句通順、意思連貫書寫工整;

3. 詞數(shù):不少于80詞(開頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))。

This term will be over. When I look back, I find that

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In a word (總之)，I will try my best to be a better student next term.

Answer 1

【答案】This term will be over. When I look back, I find that my math improved a lot because of my hard work. However, my English is still not as good as some students in my class. I plan to work harder at English next term. In my free time, I took some guitar lessons. It’s interesting to play the guitar, so I’ll keep taking guitar lessons next term. I will also join a swimming club in the new term because swimming is good for my health.

In a word, I will try my best to be a better students next term.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們對自己這一學(xué)期的表現(xiàn)做一個總結(jié)，并談?wù)勏聦W(xué)期的規(guī)劃。題目中用圖表的形式羅列了文章的寫作提綱，仔細瀏覽圖表可知，文章中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：首先介紹自己在學(xué)習(xí)上取得的進步和遇到的困難；然后介紹在文娛、體育等方面的發(fā)展情況；最后提出下學(xué)期的規(guī)劃。題目中只給出了文章的“骨架”，而“血肉”需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，補充文章的細節(jié)，使文章內(nèi)容豐富、完整，這是寫作中的一個難點。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般將來時和一般過去時為主，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語句式的表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯；應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。例如可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，使表達簡潔、清晰，也不易出錯。為了提升作文檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句等長句，或非謂語動詞等復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。