Question

【題目】情景作文

假如你是Martin，你的筆友Alice在給你的來信中說她經(jīng)常生病，情緒低落。請你給她寫封回信，告訴她應(yīng)該怎樣做。

參考詞匯: healthy food, do more exercise, enough sleep, keep happy, talk about your problems.

要求：1. 根據(jù)參考詞匯，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60詞，注意字跡工整。

Dear Alice,

I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy. I can give you some advice.

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Yours,

Martin

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Alice,

I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy. I can give you some advice. I hope this will be helpful for you. I think healthy food and exercise is the key to good health. Therefore, you should have food including fresh vegetables, fruits instead of food high in fat and sugar. Doing more exercise is also necessary for us to build up our body. You can run, swim, play table tennis and so on. Besides, enough sleep is good for your health, which makes you full of energy and in a good mood. Last but not the least, you should keep happy.

Follow my advice, I believe, you will feel better soon. Best wishes to you.

Yours,

Martin

【解析】

試題分析：本題是給筆友的一封回信，要注意書信的基本格式、語言選擇；這封回信的內(nèi)容是給朋友提建議，要對朋友的處境表示理解、同情，同時給她提一些好的建議。提建議要注意句子的語氣，多用一些情態(tài)動詞，盡量不要用祈使句。

寫作亮點：本范文以I’m sorry to hear…開頭，對朋友的處境表示同情，抓住對方的心，為下文作好鋪墊，使得建議容易被對方接受。接下來，用I hope, I think, you should, you can等等引出提建議的句子，語言中肯、語氣委婉。其中用到的賓語從句，動名詞作主語等等，使短文更加具體生動。最后一段，希望朋友接受建議，祝愿朋友好起來。水到渠成，自然收尾。