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16．假設(shè)今天是三月五日，星期六，天氣晴．你班級(jí)組織"學(xué)雷鋒，做好事"活動(dòng)．你和同學(xué)們7：30在學(xué)校門口集中，然后分頭去清潔公園、養(yǎng)老院看望老人、醫(yī)院看望生病的小孩．請(qǐng)據(jù)此寫一篇80詞左右的日記．注意日記的格式和時(shí)態(tài)，用上所給的提示詞，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．

Saturday，March 5^th Sunny
It was fine today．My classmates and I met at the school gate at 7：30．We are divided into three groups．Some helped clean up the park．Some went to the old People's home to visit the old people．They played chess with them and performed a play for them．I went to visit the sick children in the hospital with four of my classmates．We sang songs for them and told them some stories to cheer them up．I felt very happy because I could help others．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是結(jié)合圖畫將你和同學(xué)們一起學(xué)雷鋒的一天寫成日記，注意日記的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．見面時(shí)間地點(diǎn)：7：30在學(xué)校門口
2．活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；分成三組：①清潔公園、②養(yǎng)老院看望老人、下象棋和表演話劇，③醫(yī)院看望生病的小孩，唱歌和講故事，使他們高興起來
3．我的感受
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
divide into 分成…
play chess 下棋
cheer up 興奮

【高分句型】
1．We①are ②divided into three groups．
①一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)am/is/are+過去分詞
②divide into  分成…
2．We sang songs for them and told them some stories ①to ②cheer them up．
①動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語．
②cheer up 使興奮，代詞放中間
3．I felt very happy because I could help others．
這是because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．

解答 Saturday，March 5^th     Sunny
It was fine today．My classmates and I met at the school gate at 7：30．（見面時(shí)間地點(diǎn)）We are divided into three groups．【高分句型】Some helped clean up the park．Some went to the old People's home to visit the old people．They played chess with them and performed a play for them．I went to visit the sick children in the hospital with four of my classmates．We sang songs for them and told them some stories to cheer them up．【高分句型】（活動(dòng)內(nèi)容）I felt very happy because I could help others．【高分句型】（我的感受）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在寫書面表達(dá)是首先要注意的問題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱；其次，應(yīng)注意動(dòng)詞的英語，根據(jù)不同的人稱確定動(dòng)詞的形式；再次，句型應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句．