Question

為了培養(yǎng)同學(xué)們的社會(huì)責(zé)任意識(shí)和社會(huì)實(shí)踐能力，老師要求每個(gè)同學(xué)關(guān)注身邊的社區(qū)并積極參加社區(qū)的社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示以“The community centre in my neighborhood”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，包括以下要點(diǎn):
1、我家附近有個(gè)社區(qū)，大家感到很幸運(yùn)；
2、周末，義工、大學(xué)生來(lái)幫助：幫老人購(gòu)物、打掃衛(wèi)生，和他們聊天，給他們講故事；輔導(dǎo)孩子們功課；修理壞了的冰箱、自行車(chē)等；
3、我打算為社區(qū)（1）……（2）……
注意：（1）要點(diǎn)清楚，語(yǔ)言流暢；（2）字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右；
（3）短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順。
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Answer 1

The community centre in my neighborhood
I live in a small town.It is very beautiful here.We love it. Luckily there is a community centre in my neighborhood.On weekends some students come to help the old people .They help to do some cleaning ,go shopping,have a chat with the old people and tell them stories.Some help children here with their homework.Some repair broken fridges and bikes.They have a busy weekend,but they are very happy.
I hope to help them on the weekends.I can play games with the old people here.I can make them happy with me.

試題分析：本文是給材料作文，因?yàn)檫@里要寫(xiě)的是平時(shí)的義工是怎樣做的，所以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。要注意主謂一致，適當(dāng)用一些短語(yǔ)和句式。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，增加了短文的色彩如：On weekends some students come to help the old people . Some help children here with their homework. I hope to help them on the weekends等，文中用了一些連詞如：and，but等。提醒學(xué)生注意積累一些短語(yǔ)和句式。
考點(diǎn):提綱作文。