Question

【題目】每個(gè)人在學(xué)校期間，都有自己難忘的老師。假如你叫李雷。畢業(yè)在即，請你根據(jù)以下提示給你的英語老師(Miss Zhao)寫一封信。內(nèi)容包括：

1．表達(dá)感激之情；

2．回憶印象最深的一件事(一次幫助，或一次鼓勵(lì)，或一次批評……)；

3．你的感想或建議。

作文要求：

1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名；

2．語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Miss Zhao，

As you know, I've made great progress in English with your help. At this moment, I want to say “Thank you”．

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_________________________________________________________________________Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Li Lei

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Miss White

As you know, I’ve made great progress in study with your help. At this moment, I was to say“Thankyou”I will graduate in this Summer. It is memorable three years we spend together. All the things in this classroom will bring me back to the little things we enjoy together. I very appreciate the help and guide you give to me when I don't know how to do.

Perhaps, you have already forgotten, since it was only one of the millions you have done to us. But I will remember it forever. During that period, I was absorbed into computer game. I always fell asleep during class and my grade was decreasing. You always use your own time to help me, to study together with me. You never blame for anything. But I learned that I need to study hard for your help.

It is a good time in may life and I will cherish it forever. There is only one thing I want you to know before I finish. Take care of your health and I will always miss you. Yours

Lilei

【解析】試題分析：這篇作文叫小作者介紹自己印象最深的一件事。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如During that period, I was absorbed into computer game. I always fell asleep during class and my grade was decreasing. You always use your own time to help me, to study together with me.等等。