Question

【題目】【2016山東濟(jì)寧】寫作。

假如你是李 梅。你的美國(guó)筆友 Tom 在昨天的 E-mail 中告訴你，最近他對(duì)中國(guó)文化產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，希望你能給他介紹一些經(jīng)典故事。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面所給圖畫，給 Tom 回復(fù)一封 E-mail，向他講述這一經(jīng)典故事，并希望知道他對(duì)該故事及主人公的看法。

Sima Guang hit the tank（缸）

play hide and seek（捉迷藏）, full of water fall into, be frightened(驚恐的), cry, run for help think over, pick up, throw at break, be saved

要 求：

1. 文章需包括所有圖畫的內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫；

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息；

3. 100 詞左右（郵件的開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） 。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I’m very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name “Sima Guang hit the tank”.

Once Sima Guang was playing hide and seek with seven children in the backyard. There was a large water tank in the yard. It was full of water. When the kids were playing, one child accidentally fell into the tank. Other Children were so frightened that they started to run, crying for help. However, Sima GUang was different. He thought it over and then had an idea. He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank. “Bang!”the tank broke and the water ran out. The kid was saved.

Do you like the story? What do you think of Sima Guang?

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Li Mei

【解析】

試題分析：該題目要求學(xué)生給湯姆回信根據(jù)所給圖畫介紹一則經(jīng)典故事。司馬光砸缸是學(xué)生會(huì)比較熟悉的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)故事，所以組織起來(lái)不會(huì)太困難。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真觀察圖畫，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)題目要求可知該文主要以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。主語(yǔ)為第三人稱單數(shù)，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文語(yǔ)句通順流暢，段落清晰，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)了圖畫所反映的內(nèi)容。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。