Question

10．假設你是Dale，你的網(wǎng)友Cindy發(fā)來郵件，希望你知道你最感謝的人是誰，現(xiàn)在請你給她回郵件，郵件內容包括：
1．他/她的外表、興趣、愛好和職業(yè)等；
2．感謝的理由．
要求：1．短文應包括所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮；
2．語句通順、意思連貫；
3．字數(shù)80詞左右，郵件開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)內；
Dear Cindy，
Thank you for sending me your photos．You wonder who the person I thank most is．Now let me tell you．
My mother is the person who I should thank most．She is an English teacher in a middle school．She is of medium height，and wear a pair of glasses．She likes reading and playing ping-pong．She is a good teacher and she is also a good mother．
She is very busy every day．But she tries to do what she can to make me study at school．When I am ill，she often takes me to the hospital and stays with me all the time．But sometimes when she falls ill，she never goes to see a doctor．
For my mother，I'll do my best to be a good child．I'll love her forever．
Best wishes
Dale．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給出簡要寫作要點的提綱類作文．內容為假設你是Dale，你的網(wǎng)友Cindy發(fā)來郵件，希望你知道你最感謝的人是誰，現(xiàn)在請你給她回郵件．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱為第三人稱單數(shù)．寫作要點包括：1．最需感謝的人；2．他/她的外表、興趣、愛好和職業(yè)等；3．感謝的理由．常用到的重點句型和短語：try to do，make sb．do sth．，take sb．to…，定語從句，賓語從句等．

解答 Dear Cindy，
Thank you for sending me your photos．You wonder who the person I thank most is．Now let me tell you．
My mother is the person who I should thank most．She is an English teacher in a middle school．She is of medium height，and wear a pair of glasses．She likes reading and playing ping-pong．She is a good teacher and she is also a good mother．She is very busy every day．But she tries to do what she can to make me study at school．When I am ill，she often takes me to the hospital and stays with me all the time．But sometimes when she falls ill，she never goes to see a doctor．
For my mother，I'll do my best to be a good child．I'll love her forever．
Best wishes
Dale

點評 這是一篇限制了作文范疇并給出了簡要寫作提綱的作文．考生在作文時可先列好提綱，主要從兩方面展開自己的作文．再根據(jù)提示，將提綱進一步完善，并進行必要的發(fā)揮，使行文流暢，感情真摯．適當使用定語從句、賓語從句來完善句子，使文章更出彩．