Question

3．以下是Nick Vujicic的基本信息，請根據(jù)這些信息和要求，寫一篇英語短文，向某英語報社投稿．
注意：
所寫內(nèi)容必須包括上面提示的所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；
詞數(shù)：100個詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整；
文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名、姓名等其它信息，否則，不予評分．
Nick Vujicic is a world-famous speaker．His experience inspires a lot of people in the world．He was born on December 4th，1982 in Australia．Unluckily，he was born without arms or legs，but he learnt to swim，get dressed，used a computer and so on．At 21，Nick graduated from university．Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams．He has spoken to more than 3，000，000 people so far．He has ever visited China five times．In 2008，he visited Chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake．
From his story，I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般過去時態(tài)進行敘述．語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．

解答 Nick Vujicic is a world-famous speaker．His experience inspires a lot of people in the world．He was born on December 4th，1982 in Australia．Unluckily，he was born without arms or legs，but he learnt to swim，get dressed，used a computer and so on．At 21，Nick graduated from university．Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams．He has spoken to more than 3，000，000 people so far．He has ever visited China five times．In 2008，he visited Chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake．
    From his story，I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life．

點評 解答這種題目時，我們應(yīng)該仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點． 要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫． 根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習(xí)慣． 在平常的學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，讓文章更出彩．