Question

3．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic"My favourite_____"（以"我最喜歡的_____"為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格．）
What's your favourite…？Why do you like/love …？The following is only for reference．（請(qǐng)自行確定一個(gè)話題，并闡述理由．以下內(nèi)容僅供參考．）

MyfavoritePerson
My favoriteperson is my teacher，Ms．Wang．She is a 36-year-old woman．But she is tall and has long straight hair．And she often wears black pants and a white shirt．She teaches us English．We all like listening to her．Her classes are very interesting and creative．Because she has different ways of teaching．But she is very strict with us in everything．She is warm-hearted．We all know she is always ready to help others．When we are in trouble，she can try her best to help us．Once my Englishwas reallypoor，Ihad no interest about it．when she noticed this，she didn't blame me，she told me that the only way I can learn English well is to fall in love with English，she asked me to watch English movie，it worked．when wemeetinthefuture，I will say"many thanks"to her．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是以"My favourite_____"為題說說自己最喜歡的，以及為什么喜歡．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．你最喜歡…補(bǔ)充標(biāo)題
2．為什么喜歡？
 
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be strict with對(duì)…嚴(yán)格；
be ready to do sth準(zhǔn)備做某事；
in trouble處于困難中；
try one's best do to sth盡力做某事等
【高分句型】
1．We all know①she ②is always ready to help others．
①know后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②be ready to do sth準(zhǔn)備做某事
2．①When we are ②in trouble，she can ③try her best to help us．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
②in trouble處于困難中；
③try one's best do to sth盡力做某事等
3．①When she noticed this，she didn't blame me，she told me ②that the only way③I can learn English well is to fall in love with English，she④asked me to watch English movie，it worked．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
②that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．作為told的賓語(yǔ)．
③省略了關(guān)系詞that的定語(yǔ)從句，that作為從句的賓語(yǔ)，修飾先行詞way．
④ask sb to do sth 讓某人做某事

解答 My favorite Person
My favorite person is my teacher，Ms．Wang．（最喜歡的人是王老師）She is a 36-year-old woman．But she is tall and has long straight hair．And she often wears black pants and a white shirt．She teaches us English．We all like listening to her．Her classes are very interesting and creative．Because she has different ways of teaching．But she is very strict with us in everything．She is warm-hearted．We all know she is always ready to help others．【高分句型】When we are in trouble，she can try her best to help us．【高分句型】Once my English was really poor，I had no interest about it．When she noticed this，she didn't blame me，she told me that the only way I can learn English well is to fall in love with English，she asked me to watch English movie，it worked．【高分句型】（通過介紹以及事例說明為什么喜歡）When we meet in the future，I will say"many thanks"to her．（表達(dá)感謝）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題后，考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．