Question

8．在中考來(lái)臨之際，許多學(xué)生感到壓力很大．為了緩解緊張情緒，發(fā)揮最佳水平，請(qǐng)你從學(xué)習(xí)和生活兩方面為同學(xué)們提出幾條合理建議．
要求：（1）語(yǔ)言正確．
（2）書(shū)寫(xiě)工整、規(guī)范．
（3）詞數(shù)：40左右．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
The senior high school entrance exams are coming．Many students are stressed out In order to do well in the exams，I think you shouldstudy hard in class firstly．Then after class，you can review your lessons．At noon you'd better have a short rest and in the evening you should drink some milk when you go to bed
Relaxing in a right way is as important as learning．You can do some sports，such as playing football，basketball and so on．
Best wishes to you．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是從學(xué)習(xí)和生活兩方面為同學(xué)們提出幾條合理建議．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第二人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．學(xué)習(xí)上的建議
2．生活上的建議
3．祝愿．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
had better do sth 最好做某事
have a rest休息一下
as…as  和…一樣…
such as 例如
and so on 等等
高分句型：
At noon ①you'd better have a short rest and in the evening you should drink some milk ②when you go to bed．
①had better do sth 最好做某事，提出建議的一種句型，比較委婉．
②when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．

①Relaxing in a right way is ②as important as learning．
①動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)
②as…as  和…一樣…中間用形容詞或副詞的原級(jí)，本句是加上形容詞important，表示一樣重要．
He runs as fast as Tom．他和湯姆跑的一樣快（fast是副詞）

解答 The senior high school entrance exams are coming．Many students are stressed out．In order to do well in the exams，I think you should study hard in class firstly．Then after class，you can review your lessons．（學(xué)習(xí)上的建議）
At noon you'd better have a short rest and in the evening you should drink some milk when you go to bed．（高分句型）Relaxing in a right way is as important as learning．（高分句型）You can do some sports，such as playing football，basketball and so on．（生活上的建議）
Best wishes to you．（祝愿）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 此為材料作文，要仔細(xì)審題，抓住重點(diǎn)，在闡述自我保護(hù)的方法時(shí)要把所給信息條理清楚的表達(dá)出來(lái)，可使用一些表示順序的詞，使論述更明確，更有層次感．還要注意多使用一些委婉的提建議的句型，盡量使用不同的句型以避免文章枯燥單調(diào)．要求語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法，詞匯，時(shí)態(tài)正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范