Question

文段表達(dá)。（共10分）
請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇短文，講述自己在學(xué)習(xí)或生活中克服困難的一件事。內(nèi)容包括你遇到的困難是什么；你是怎樣克服的；你從此事中領(lǐng)悟到了什么。（不少于50字）
參考詞語：difficulty, learn, overcome(克服)\

Answer 1

We moved to the city when I entered my middle school. But my problem was that no one cooked for me at noon because my parents didn’t come home at noon. I ate outside. Then I watched my parents cooking dinner carefully. A few days later, I learned to cook for myself, and now I can cook delicious food.
I learned from it that we may meet some difficulties in our life. But if we have confidence and are good at learning, everything will be better.

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。要求介紹要寫出以下三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，1) 困難是什么？2) 怎樣克服的？3) 感想或領(lǐng)悟,另外,根據(jù)題目要求確定本文的時(shí)態(tài)是一般過去時(shí).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文不僅介紹人物時(shí)注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。.如We moved to the city when I entered my middle school，I learned from it that we may meet some difficulties in our life. But if we have confidence and are good at learning, everything will be better . A few days later Then,，等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。