Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中所給的提示，寫一篇短文介紹你的網(wǎng)友Mike。

要求：1) 字?jǐn)?shù)在80左右，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和姓名。

2）文中須包括所有提示的內(nèi)容，每個(gè)方面都可適當(dāng)加以想象發(fā)揮。

基本信息	14歲，高個(gè)子，戴眼鏡，在七年級(jí)（3）班 尖子生，最喜歡的學(xué)科是……
生活和飲食	每天6點(diǎn)半起床，步行上學(xué)… … 常吃 / 從不吃 / 很少吃…… 每周鍛煉…… （給出合理建議）
愛好	擅長(zhǎng)……；是……的一員
夢(mèng)想	成為一名……

My online friend

I have an online friend. His name is Mike._____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

My online friend

I have a online friend. His name is Mike. He is 14 years old. He is very tall and wears glasses. He is in Class 3, Grade 7. He is the best students in his class. His favorite subject is history. He like it because he thinks it is interesting. He gets up at half past 6 every day. Then he walks to school. He often eats bread and milk. He never eats vegetables. He seldom eats fruits. He does sports every week. I think he should eat more fruit and vegetables. They are good for health. He is good at playing basketball. He is a member of his school basketball club. His dream is to become s basketball player.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們介紹自己的網(wǎng)友Mike的情況，這一題材是我們平時(shí)接觸比較多的，在教材中也有所體現(xiàn)。在介紹人物時(shí)，我們應(yīng)主要從以下幾個(gè)方面來著手，首先是他的姓名、年齡、外貌、年級(jí)等這些基本情況；其次是他的興趣愛好；還有他的生活習(xí)慣、夢(mèng)想等。題目中有非常清楚的提綱，我們可以根據(jù)這些內(nèi)容提示，用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。通過分析可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)、第三人稱單數(shù)形式he來敘述，因此我們應(yīng)特別注意每句話中謂語動(dòng)詞形式的變化。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型和短語，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目要求給我們介紹了他的網(wǎng)友Mike的情況。首先這篇短文內(nèi)容完整，層次清楚。短文里包含了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，沒有遺漏。其次這篇短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，尤其是謂語動(dòng)詞第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化非常準(zhǔn)確，符合英語的語法規(guī)范；另外，短文中也使用了一些好的句型和短語，這些句型的使用，使文章的意思更加連貫，表達(dá)也更流暢。例如，He is the best students in his class. His favorite subject is history、He like it because he thinks it is interesting、I think he should eat more fruit and vegetables. They are good for health、He is good at playing basketball等。