Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

新學(xué)期開(kāi)始了，假如你要競(jìng)選新的班干部，如班長(zhǎng)（the class monitor）、衛(wèi)生委員（the cleaning monitor）、體育委員（the PE monitor）、文藝委員（the art monitor）等，你也想成其中的一員，成為你們班的班干部，請(qǐng)選擇一種班干部，并發(fā)表你想勝任此職位的理由。適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，描述清楚自己的特長(zhǎng)，表達(dá)要條理清晰， 80詞左右。

可參考的單詞 ： kind new start term choose want enjoy can run fast

可參考的句型 ：I’d like get on well with do well at school be ready to help others

want to be fit and healthy in the playground between lessons

play ball games get the best score in every match do cleaning

clean and tidy at home would like just like make...beautiful

Answer 1

【答案】A new term is coming. There will be some new class leaders in our class. And I want to be one of them, too. I want to be a monitor. I think I can do it well. I have the following reasons. First, I am good at getting on well with all kinds of students. Second, I can do well in all of my subjects. So I can help other students if they need my help. Third, I am helpful. I am always ready to help others with their studies and their lives. I believe that our class will be the best one in our school this term.

【解析】

寫作思路：首先要指出新學(xué)期要你要競(jìng)選的職位；接下來(lái)陳述你要競(jìng)選此職位的理由，即你的優(yōu)勢(shì)在哪里；最后表達(dá)出自己的決心和信心。本篇作文，首先說(shuō)A new term is coming…, I want to be a monitor.做到開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，指出我要競(jìng)選的職位；接下來(lái)陳述自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)，其中用到First ….Second… Third…使文章層次分明，條理清晰；且be good at, get on well with，be ready to do 等短語(yǔ)的使用，使文章增色不少；最后作者用I believe that our class will be the best one in our school this term.表明了自己的決心和信心，作為作為的結(jié)尾。整篇文章時(shí)態(tài)和詞語(yǔ)運(yùn)用正確，是一篇很優(yōu)秀的作文。