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10．你班上周舉行了關(guān)于是否縮短寒暑假并增加春秋假的討論，同學(xué)們各抒己見．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中的討論記錄，結(jié)合你自己對(duì)此事的看法，用英語(yǔ)給校報(bào)寫一篇短文．

贊成	=1、目前學(xué)期長(zhǎng)而枯燥，學(xué)生無法充分休息 =2、春秋兩季風(fēng)景優(yōu)美，學(xué)生可以感受自然
反對(duì)	=1、一年分成四個(gè)學(xué)期，影響學(xué)習(xí)效果 =2、作業(yè)可能因此變多，家中學(xué)習(xí)壓力
你的觀點(diǎn)	…（至少一點(diǎn)）

注意：1）文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱
2）結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)言通順，意思清楚，連貫，書寫規(guī)范
3）詞數(shù)不少于90．文章開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
We had a discussion about whether to shorten the summer and winter holidays and add the spring and autumn holidays lat week．Opinions are different．
Some students thinkthat the terms are long and boring at present and students can't get enough rest．Spring and autumn have beautiful views．If the spring and autumn holidays are added，students will have more chances to feel the beauty of the nature．
Some students think if we add the spring and autumn holidays，a year will be divided into four terms and it will have bad effect on teaching and learning．If so，students may have more homework to do and get more pressure to face．
I don't think we need to add the spring and autumn holidays，but we need more holidays without too much homework．It will be better for students to have more time for their hobbies．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：If the spring and autumn holidays are added，students will have more chances to feel the beauty of the nature如果加上春秋假期，學(xué)生會(huì)有更多機(jī)會(huì)去感受大自然的美麗．這是由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，時(shí)態(tài)遵循主將從現(xiàn)．從句中主語(yǔ)是the spring and autumn holidays，動(dòng)作的承受者，因此用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，be動(dòng)詞+done，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是復(fù)數(shù)用are，add的過去分詞是added．
句型二：I don't think we need to add the spring and autumn holidays我認(rèn)為我們不需要增加春秋假期．這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句．在賓語(yǔ)從句中如果主句是I think，從句的否定詞一般要轉(zhuǎn)移到主句上來，即I don't think…從句的時(shí)態(tài)要結(jié)合語(yǔ)境選擇合適用法．need to do sth需要做某事．

解答 that the terms are long and boring at present and students can't get enough rest．（表明觀點(diǎn)） Spring and autumn have beautiful views．If the spring and autumn holidays are added，students will have more chances to feel the beauty of the nature【高分句型一】（說明原因）．
Some students think if we add the spring and autumn holidays，a year will be divided into four terms and it will have bad effect on teaching and learning（另一些學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)）．If so，students may have more homework to do and get more pressure to face（說明原因）．
I don't think we need to add the spring and autumn holidays【高分句型二】（我的觀點(diǎn)），but we need more holidays without too much homework．It will be better for students to have more time for their hobbies（我的原因）．

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