Question

1．假如你是李華，你的美國筆友 Daniel 計劃今年暑假來江西度假，他向你了解江西城市生活和農(nóng)村生活的情況，以便選擇度假地點，請根據(jù)下面提供的關(guān)鍵詞，給他寫一封郵件，先介紹城市生活和農(nóng)村生活的相同點和不同點．然后說說你自己更喜歡哪種生活，并說明理由．
城市生活：supermarket，restaurant，apartment，car，bus，cinema，club，park
農(nóng)村生活：vegetable，rice，house，motorbike，bicycle，visit，neighbors
共同點：getting better，keeping fit
提示：郵件內(nèi)容要用上所有關(guān)鍵詞，可以從吃住行娛樂四個方面來寫，詞數(shù)不少于 80，開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好了．
Dear Daniel，
    I'm very happy that you are coming to Jiangxi to spend your summer holiday． There are some similarities and differences between city life and country life．Both in the city and in the country，people's life is getting better and better，They pay more and more attention to'keeping fit．However，there are some differences．In the city people go to supermarkets to buy what they need．They eat at home or in restaurants．They live in apartments and travel around by car or bus．After work，they go to cinemas，clubs or parks to relax themselves．In the country，people grow vegetables and rice by themselves．They live in houses and ride motorbikes or bicycles to go around．In their spare time they would like to visit their neighbors or watch TV at home．As for me，I prefer to live in the city because there are more places to enjoy myself．I often go to libraries，bookstores and science museums，where I can learn much about the world．
I am looking forward to meeting you!

Best wishes!
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是假如你是李華，你的美國筆友 Daniel 計劃今年暑假來江西度假，他向你了解江西城市生活和農(nóng)村生活的情況，以便選擇度假地點，根據(jù)提供的關(guān)鍵詞，給他寫一封郵件，寫作內(nèi)容主要應(yīng)該體現(xiàn)：1．城市生活和農(nóng)村生活的相同點和不同點 2．你自己更喜歡哪種生活，并說明理由，由于是介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)，故寫作時要用第一人稱，介紹家鄉(xiāng)情況或人們的狀況時，可用第三人稱，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，寫作時要盡量用到In the country和in the city 來分別闡述，同時在說明自己更喜歡的生活時，可用到prefer等詞．

解答 Dear Daniel，
   I'm very happy that you are coming to Jiangxi to spend your summer holiday．There are some similarities and differences between city life and country life．Both in the city and in the country，people's life is getting better and better，They pay more and more attention to keeping fit．However，there are some differences．In the city people go to supermarkets to buy what they need．They eat at home or in restaurants．They live in apartments and travel around by car or bus．After work，they go to cinemas，clubs or parks to relax themselves．In the country，people grow vegetables and rice by themselves．They live in houses and ride motorbikes or bicycles to go around．In their spare time they would like to visit their neighbors or watch TV at home．As for me，I prefer to live in the city because there are more places to enjoy myself．I often go to libraries，bookstores and science museums，where I can learn much about the world．
   I am looking forward to meeting you!
Best wishes!
Li Hua

點評 本文是提綱作文，主要考查學(xué)生運用已學(xué)的語言基礎(chǔ)知識和已掌握的英語寫作技能準(zhǔn)確表達客觀事實，闡述個人觀點，進行思想交流的書面表達能力．在本文中自己的觀點部分要注意把理由表達清楚，由于是兩者的比較，可以用到prefer等詞．