Question

   父母的鼓勵有利于孩子健康成長。鼓勵可以是贊許的話語，也可以是一份禮物。請根據(jù)表格描述李江的父母曾經(jīng)對他鼓勵的方式，對此做出你的評價并表達你希望你的父母如何鼓勵你。

人物	成長的點滴	鼓勵的方式
李江	學習進步	買禮物，如：文具(stationery) 、手機(mobile phone) 等
	競賽獲獎	去飯店慶祝
	分擔家務	多給零花錢
你的評價與希望：……

要求:1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括提供的所有信息，可適當發(fā)揮；

2.評價李江父母的做法;表達你希望你的父母如何鼓勵你；

3.文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)；

4.語氣通順，意思連貫，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整；

5.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名及地名。

Parents' encouragement is good for their children's growth. It's a nice way for parents to speak highly of their children when they make progress.                     

                                                       

                                                  

Answer 1

參考范文：

     Parents’ encouragement is good for their children's growth. It's a nice way for parents to speak highly of their children when they make progress. It is very common for parents to buy their children presents. For example,when Li Jiang made progress in his study,his parents bought him stationery,a mobile phone and so on. After Li Jiang won prizes in the competitions,his parents took him to the restaurant for a big dinner. When Li Jiang did some housework,he could get some extra pocket money from his parents.

    I don't think it's really a good way for Li Jiang's parents to give him something or money as encouragement. I don't want my parents to buy me something when I've done very well in my study. I hope they can give me more chances to decide what I can do in my free time. If so,I will be more confident to do everything better. And it’s good for my growth.