Question

5．初三年級學(xué)生李雷近來十分焦慮．體育測試即將到來，而他卻由于霧霾 （haze weather）頻頻來襲無法進(jìn)行戶外體育鍛煉．他寫信給好友Jack尋求幫助．假如你是Jack，請給他寫一封信，從鍛煉的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)及日常飲食等方面提一些建議，使他保持良好的身體狀況．
要求：1．文章中必須包括所有信息；
2．不得使用真實(shí)的人名和校名等信息；
3．詞數(shù)80詞左右；
4．開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Dear Li Lei，
I've known about your worries．Here is some advice for you．
Firstly，when haze weather happens/comes，it's better not to do exercise outdoor．If you need to exercise，you can choose indoor activities．
Secondly，haze often gets thinner after the sun shines．So the time from 10 a．m．to 4 p．m．is a good time to exercise．You can do some outdoor sports during this time because haze is not so serious．
Last but not least，improving health is also important．Live a happy life，like eating more fruit and vegetables，and you will have more energy to fight against haze．
I hope my advice can help you．
Yours，
Jack．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
If you need to exercise，you can choose indoor activities．如果你需要鍛煉，可以選擇戶內(nèi)的活動(dòng)．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
You can do some outdoor sports during this time because haze is not so serious這個(gè)期間你可以做些戶外的活動(dòng)因?yàn)殪F霾不是很嚴(yán)重．
because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．

解答 Dear Li Lei，
I've known your worries．Here is some advice for you．
Firstly，when haze weather happens/comes，it's better not to do exercise outdoor．If you need to exercise，you can choose indoor activities．【高分句型一】（鍛煉地點(diǎn)）
Secondly，haze often gets thinner after the sun shines．So the time from 10 a．m．to 4 p．m．is a good time to exercise．You can do some outdoor sports during this time because haze is not so serious．【高分句型二】（鍛煉時(shí)間）
Last but not least，improving health is also important．Live a happy life，like eating more fruit and vegetables，and you will have more energy to fight against haze．（飲食）
I hope my advice will help you．
                                                   Yours，
                                                      Jack

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