Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)(共20分) XI.書面表達(dá)（共1小題；滿分20分）

Lin Fen 在學(xué)習(xí)英語的過程中遇到了一些困難：

1、不能正確地讀一些單詞；

2、記不住生詞，而且總是寫錯(cuò)單詞；

3、和外教談話時(shí)聽不懂。

請你根據(jù)以上提示給她提一些建議。

要求：語義連貫，條理清楚，包含要點(diǎn)。字?jǐn)?shù)80-100詞。書信格式已給出。

Answer 1

【答案】

I was happy to know your trouble about learning English. You asked me for some advice on learning English. At first, I also found it hard to remember so many words and phrases. Then I found that the best way to remember words was to learn their pronunciation. There are some useful rules in the pronunciation, and they can help me remember new words easily. I also had some grammar problems when I was in first grade. I tried to read more and practice more. Now it isn't very difficult for me to understand the sentences and passages. That's my secret of learning English. I hope it helps you. Please never give up!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓我們給林芬提一些英語學(xué)習(xí)的建議。作者主要從自身學(xué)習(xí)英語中所遇見的一些問題，提了一些寶貴意見。另外，寫作時(shí)，還注意了語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者講述了在自己過去學(xué)習(xí)英語和現(xiàn)在的情況。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如hen I found that the best way to remember words was to learn their pronunciation. Now it isn't very difficult for me to understand the sentences and passages等。