Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你們班要去兒童福利院做志愿活動，你打算邀請你的朋友—交換生

Peter參加。請你用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他時(shí)間，交通方式，活動內(nèi)容，以及需要準(zhǔn)

備什么。

提示詞語：bus，read，play games，songs，stones，gifts，help

提示問題：When and how are you going to the Children s Home?

What are you going to do there?

What do you advise Peter to prepare for the volunteer work?

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to join the volunteer work at the Children’s Home. We will go there on our school bus next Saturday.

When we are there, we are going to read books to the kids and play games with them. I think they will be very happy to see us. Besides, we are going to teach kids some English songs and help them with their spoken English. What’s more, we can tell them some English stories. I believe they will be interested because kids always love stories.

Before you come, you’d better prepare some books or small gifts for the children. I hope you can join us and give them a hand.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文叫小作者邀請她的好朋友參加志愿者活動。在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如I think they will be very happy to see us. Besides, we are going to teach kids some English songs and help them with their spoken English. What’s more, we can tell them some English stories. I believe they will be interested because kids always love stories.等等。