Question

9．初中三年的英語學習中，我們與北京陽光中學的同學成了朝夕相處的朋友，其中Daniel的善良和助人為樂等優(yōu)秀品質給我們留下了深刻的印象．請根據(jù)課本內容及下表提示，用英語寫一篇題為"My Friend Daniel"的短文．

Daniel
Appearance		Likes
		Dislikes	sports
Personality	helpful--help an old woman cross the road kind--work at the Helping Hands Club  creative--create a TV programme …
What can you learn from him？

注意事項：
1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右（已給出的文章開頭不計入總詞數(shù)）；
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息；
3．文章必須包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作適當發(fā)揮．
My Friend Daniel
My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School．Hewears glasses．He likes playing computer games but dislikes doing sports．
Daniel is helpful and kind．Once he helped an old woman cross the road．He spends much of his spare time working at the Helping Hands Club．He is such a creative boy that he created a TV programme for a competition．Daniel is also polite and everyone likes him．
Daniel is so great that we must learn from him．We will try our best to help each other and get along well with others to create a happy home for both you and me．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表給出信息的提綱作文．內容為根據(jù)課本所學內容及表格提示，用英語寫一篇題為"My Friend Daniel"的短文．描述Daniel的善良和助人為樂等優(yōu)秀品質．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱為第三人稱．寫作要點包括：1．Daniel 的外貌描述；2．Daniel的喜好；3．Daniel的個性；4．從Daniel身上所學的．常用到的重點句型和短語：sb．spend some time （in） doing sth．某人在做某事上花費多長時間，such+a/an+adj+n，so…that，try one's best to do sth．等．

解答 My Friend Daniel
My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School．He wears glasses．He has short black hair，small eyes and big mouth．
He likes playing computer games but dislikes doing sports．
Daniel is helpful and kind．Once he helped an old woman cross the road．He spends much of his spare time working at the Helping Hands Club．He is such a creative boy that he created a TV program for a competition．Daniel is also polite and everyone likes him．
Daniel is so great that we must learn from him．We will try our best to help each other and get along well with others to create a happy home for both you and me．

點評 這是一篇表格給出寫作提綱的作文．考生在寫作時表格內容要全部包括在內．并注意適當發(fā)揮．根據(jù)表格內容需從Daniel的外貌、喜好、個性及從他身上所學到的東西四個方面展開作文．作文時適當?shù)氖褂贸Ｓ媒Y構及復合句，可使文章增添不少色彩．