Question

【題目】 書面表達 隨著我們不斷成長，生活不僅給予了我們許多快樂時光，同時伴隨不少煩惱．仔細(xì)閱讀下面小華寫給英語報社的信，結(jié)合自己的實際，運用所學(xué)知識，請你以編輯的名義，就他的頻惱在回信中給出好的建議．

Dear sir，

I'm Xiaohua，15，a middle school student． I have some problems to tell you， my parents always say to me， "Study， study， do homework， do your homework． " when I come back． However，they don' t know how hard I study at school from 7：00 am to 8：30 p．m． every day．

And last Sunday， my 3﹣year﹣old brother troubled me again and again while I was studying for the coming exam． I really wanted to get better grades， so I couldn't stand him any more， I shouted at him in anger， thus he cried loudly． Then my mother came in， she blamed me without asking"why"．

My eyes were full of tears at that time． It was not my fault． Why did she treat me like that？Didn't mother love me？ After all． I'm also her birth child， My dear editor， what can I do？ Could you give me some suggestions？

Sincerely，

Xiaohua

要求：

（1）卷面整潔（無污跡），書寫工整（有美感）．

（2）全文字?jǐn)?shù)不少于90詞．書信開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入單詞總數(shù)．

（3）條理清楚，句式規(guī)范，標(biāo)點符號和大小寫使用正確．

（4）內(nèi)容盡量就小華的煩惱給出好的建議，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名．

Dear Xiaohua，

I'm glad to receive your letter． I have ever had the same experience． I even had a fight with my parents．But now， I fully understand them． _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope these help!

Tony

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Xiaohua，

I'm glad to receive your letter．I have ever had the same experience．I even had a fight with my parents．But now，I fully understand them．

First，as parents，their dream is that one day you can get good grades．So they put emphasis on homework every day．Why not talk with your parents？You can tell them that you finished your homework if you really did it．Or you can help them do some housework after school．Second，for your little brother，he is just a baby．He is glad to see you after your coming back from school．So he wants to play with you．Why don't you play with him for a few minutes? And you also can tell him that you have something important to do．Maybe he will get your point．At last，believe your parents．They all love you forever. All you need to do is communication. Then you will get on well with your parents and brother.

I hope these can help you!

Tony

【解析】

這篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be glad to，have a fight with，get good grades，put emphasis on，help sb. do，do some housework，come back，play with sb.，something important，at last，get on well with等。而固定句型Why not talk with your parents?/ Why don't you play with him for a few minutes?和As parents，their dream is that one day you can get good grades / you can tell them that you finished your homework if you really did it/ All you need to do is communication等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。