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15．某班英語課上，就"爭當(dāng)中華好少年"進行小組交流活動，請你根據(jù)活動記錄情況，以
"How to be a good student？"為題，寫一篇英語短文．

良好習(xí)慣 誠實守信	生活習(xí)慣：健康飲食、加強鍛煉
	學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣：上課認(rèn)真聽講、按時完成作業(yè) 不撒謊、考試不作弊
遵守校規(guī)	嚴(yán)禁私自下河洗澡，禁帶手機進校園，不打架斗毆
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要求：1．全文字?jǐn)?shù)90詞左右．文章開頭已給出，不計入單詞總數(shù)．
2．條理清楚，書寫T整，句式規(guī)范，標(biāo)點符號和大小寫使用正確．
3．內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的提示信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；文中不能m現(xiàn)真實的人名、
地名．
How to be a good student？
It's very important to be a good student．As teenagers，how to be a good student？
In my opinion，                            

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
it's necessary to develop good habits in life and study養(yǎng)成好的生活和學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣是必要的．
it's+adj+to do sth做某事是怎樣的
【高分句型二】
When someone is in trouble，we should give them a hand．當(dāng)人們有困難，我們應(yīng)該幫助他．
when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．

解答 How to be a good student？
It's very important to be a good student．As teenagers，how to be a good student？
In my opinion，there are lots of things we should do．Firstly，it's necessary to develop good habits in life and study．【高分句型一】For example，we should eat healthily and do much exercise every day．Besides，we should listen to the teacher carefully and finish homework on time．Secondly，be honest．Don't tell lies and never cheat in tests．Honesty is the best policy．（良好習(xí)慣誠實守信）Thirdly，we are supposed to obey the school rules．Don't go swimming alone without permission，and don't take mobile phones to school and so on．（遵守校規(guī)）Finally，we should get on well with our classmates．When someone is in trouble，we should give them a hand．【高分句型二】（與同學(xué)和睦相處，幫助別人）

點評 要避免不假思索地圍繞提綱堆砌材料，寫一些"不痛不癢"的句子，或者將中文提綱簡單地譯成英文，或者將英文提示生硬地搬到作文里．而是在所給材料的基礎(chǔ)上，合理巧妙地構(gòu)思全文，充分表現(xiàn)主題的過程．