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10．近日，學(xué)校正在舉行"The person who has influenced me most"的演講比賽，你寫(xiě)了一篇演講稿，準(zhǔn)備參加演講比賽，內(nèi)容提示如下：
1．對(duì)我影響最大的人是魯濱遜，他生于富有的家庭，卻迷上了航海；
2．他樂(lè)意接受挑戰(zhàn)，堅(jiān)持實(shí)現(xiàn)他的夢(mèng)想；
3．他旅程中陷入困境，在荒涼的島嶼上搭起帳篷求生；
4．他獨(dú)自一人在島上生活了十八年，足夠耐心地等待回家的機(jī)會(huì)；
5．我應(yīng)該…
注意事項(xiàng)：
1．演講稿須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；
2．第5個(gè)要點(diǎn)須用2-3句話(huà)展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，演講稿的首尾已在答題卷上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
4．參考詞匯：航行，航海（sailing）   帳篷（tent）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
He is ready to take on challenges and insists on achieving his dream．
句中涉及的短語(yǔ)有：be ready to do sth 準(zhǔn)備好做某事；take on 接受、呈現(xiàn)；insist on doing sth 堅(jiān)持做某事．這句話(huà)意為：他準(zhǔn)備好了接受挑戰(zhàn)，并堅(jiān)持實(shí)現(xiàn)他的夢(mèng)想．
高分句型二：
When I'm in trouble in my my daily life，his spirit keeps me going．
句中"When I'm in trouble in my my daily life"為"when"引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，句中涉及到的短語(yǔ)有：be in trouble 處于困境之中；keep sb doing sth 是某人持續(xù)做某事． 這句話(huà)意為：當(dāng)我在生活中遇到困難時(shí)，他的精神使我一直堅(jiān)持．

解答 The person who has influenced me most is Robinson．（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題）
  He was born in a wealthy family，but he is crazy about sailing．He is ready to take on challenges and insists on achieving his dream．【高分句型一】He gets into trouble during his journey．He puts up a tent on the lonely island for a living．He has lived alone on the island for 18 years．He is patient enough to wait for a chance to return home．I think I can learn from him．When I'm in trouble in my my daily life，his spirit keeps me going．【高分句型二】（介紹魯濱遜的事跡）
    That's all．Thank you．（致謝）

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