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11．假如你是張武，是某校八年級學(xué)生，感到學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)太重，每天要學(xué)習(xí)的科目多，老師布罝的作業(yè)多，連周末和節(jié)假日都有做不完的作業(yè)，很多時(shí)候放學(xué)后老師還要補(bǔ)課，每天幾乎都沒有屬于自己的時(shí)間，睡眠時(shí)間嚴(yán)重不足，身心疲憊，不知道怎么辦．請你以張武的名義用英語寫一封80-100詞的信給某報(bào)社的中學(xué)生信箱，談?wù)勀愕倪@種情況，并希望老師們少布罝作業(yè)，多關(guān)愛學(xué)生的健康成長．
部分參考詞匯：editor （編輯）task（任務(wù)）healthy growth（健康成長）subjects（科目）
Dear editor，
My name is Zhang Wu．I'm a student of Grade eight．I want to tell you something about my study．（開篇點(diǎn)題）
I feel so tired because there are too much homework．I have to learn many subjects．Our teachers all ask us to do homework every day．So I don't have time to do what I like．What's more，I don't have enough time to sleep well．I am too tired to learn well．Now I don't know what to do．（敘述我的問題）
In my opinion，it is necessary for students to do homework after class．【高分句型一】However，we will feel tired if we don't have time to relax．【高分句型二】I hope our teachers can care for our problems of healthy growth and set less homework．（發(fā)表我的看法及期待）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In my opinion，it is necessary for students to do homework after class．
句中使用句式為"it is+形容詞+for sb to do sth"，"in one's opinion"意為"依某人的觀點(diǎn)"．這句話意為：在我看來，課后做作業(yè)對學(xué)生來說是必要的．
高分句型二：
However，we will feel tired if we don't have time to relax．
句中"if we don't have time to relax"為條件狀語從句，遵循"主將從現(xiàn)"原則．這句話意為：然而，如果我們沒有時(shí)間休息，我們會覺得累．

解答 Dear editor，
My name is Zhang Wu．I'm a student of Grade eight．I want to tell you something about my study．（開篇點(diǎn)題）
I feel so tired because there are too much homework．I have to learn many subjects．Our teachers all ask us to do homework every day．So I don't have time to do what I like．What's more，I don't have enough time to sleep well．I am too tired to learn well．Now I don't know what to do．（敘述我的問題）
In my opinion，it is necessary for students to do homework after class．【高分句型一】However，we will feel tired if we don't have time to relax．【高分句型二】I hope our teachers can care for our problems of healthy growth and set less homework．（發(fā)表我的看法及期待）

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