Question

【題目】書面表達

每個人在一生中會遇到許多重要的人，他們對你的一生產(chǎn)生重要的影響。你的好朋友Julia 就是這樣的人。請以“Julia—the person who has influenced my life most”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的短文。

Answer 1

【答案】Julia—the person who

has influenced my life most

There are a lot of people who are important to me in my life. Some of them are my family, and some are my friends. Without them I won't live happily. But there is one person who has influenced me most. She made me change into a nicer person. She is Julia. She had a great influence on my habit and my mind. She changed my way to communicate with other people. That is really important to my life and my personality.

I have to say, maybe a person in this world will never have a really best friend, but I am a lucky person that I have one called Julia.

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文，以“Julia—the person who has influenced my life most”為題，寫一篇短文介紹我的好朋友Julia。

結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般過去時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：There are……，Some of them are……，She made me……，but I am……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。