Question

2．仔細(xì)觀察圖片，并按要求作文．

寫作要求：
1．結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際，描述畫面所反映的現(xiàn)狀．
2．簡(jiǎn)述這一現(xiàn)狀帶來(lái)的后果．
3．針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)狀，表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)或愿望．
4．詞數(shù)大約60-90詞（短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
5．文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實(shí)校名和姓名等信息．
詞語(yǔ)提示：stress（壓力）    short-sighted（近視的）  improving classes（提高班）
eyesight（視力）  poor（弱的）     do sports（做運(yùn)動(dòng)）    relax（放松）
Nowadays，we students have heavy burden （負(fù)擔(dān)） of studies．At school，we begin our classes fromabout 7：30 in the morning and finish too many classes till 6：00 in the eveningevery day．Besides，after class we have to spend a great deal of time doing ourhomework and going over our lessons．What's worse，we still take all kinds ofimproving classes at the weekend，which makes us very tired both in physicalityand in mind．
As a result，wehave no time to do sports，take part in activities or even make friends．Because of much heavier schoolwork and less rest and sleep，our health isbecoming poorer and poorer．Meanwhile，most of us are short-sighted．
In my opinion，it'stime to say goodbye to our thick glasses．Five days devoted to school areenough for us．The world is colorful and there is a lot of fun in it．We needour own time to do what we like．If so，we will have a wonderful life．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是描述畫面所反映的現(xiàn)狀，簡(jiǎn)述這一現(xiàn)狀帶來(lái)的后果，表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)或愿望．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．描述圖畫，描述現(xiàn)狀：學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，課程多
2．帶來(lái)的后果；
3．表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)或愿望
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
spend+時(shí)間+doing sth 花時(shí)間做某事
what's worse 更糟糕的是
because of 由于
take part in 參加
比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí) 越來(lái)越…

【高分句型】
1．①What's worse，we still take all kinds of improving classes at the weekend，②which③makes us very tired both in physicalityand in mind．
①what's worse 更糟糕的是
②which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．修飾前面的整個(gè)句子．
③make sb+adj 讓某人怎樣
2．①Because of much heavier schoolwork and less rest and sleep，our health is becoming②poorer and poorer．
①because of 由于 后接名詞、代詞或動(dòng)名詞
②比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí) 越來(lái)越…

3．We need our own time①to do ②what we like．
①動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)．
②what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，作為do的賓語(yǔ)．

解答 Nowadays，we students have heavy burden of studies．At school，we begin our classes from about 7：30 in the morning and finish too many classes till 6：00 in the evening every day．Besides，after class we have to spend a great deal of time doing our homework and going over our lessons．What's worse，we still take all kinds of improving classes at the weekend，which makes us very tired both in physicality and in mind．【高分句型】（描述圖畫，描述現(xiàn)狀）
As a result，we have no time to do sports，take part in activities or even make friends．Because of much heavier schoolwork and less rest and sleep，our health is becoming poorer and poorer．【高分句型】Meanwhile，most of us are short-sighted．（帶來(lái)的后果）
In my opinion，it's time to say goodbye to our thick glasses．Five days devoted to school are enough for us．The world is colorful and there is a lot of fun in it．We need our own time to do what we like．【高分句型】If so，we will have a wonderful life．（表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)或愿望）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 1．看圖作文通常有一定得提示，所以在動(dòng)筆前一定要通讀提示，弄懂寫作要求，如時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件發(fā)生地的先后順序等． 
2．圖畫是作文的依據(jù)，要仔細(xì)觀察分析圖畫的畫面，弄清畫面所反映的真實(shí)內(nèi)涵或蘊(yùn)含的某種哲理． 
3．找出圖中事物之間的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系．如果多幅圖畫，就要分析畫與畫之間的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系及畫中人物、事物之間的邏輯聯(lián)系．要根據(jù)畫面情景展開(kāi)聯(lián)想． 
4．反復(fù)閱讀所給的關(guān)鍵詞，并以此為線索從中悟出試題設(shè)計(jì)者要闡述的中心思想．