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【題目】寫作
臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校要求每個(gè)初三學(xué)生寫封信給各個(gè)家長(zhǎng)，簡(jiǎn)要匯報(bào)三年來(lái)初中生活的收獲與存在問(wèn)題。假如你是Jim，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的內(nèi)容提示，用英文做一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短的匯報(bào)。

收 獲	1）學(xué)到很多知識(shí)，提高了學(xué)習(xí)技能。 2）了解到許多名人及他們的事跡。（舉1-2個(gè)例子，參考人名：Spud， Tan Dun， Armstrong， Marie Curie， Audrey Hepburn...） 3）學(xué)會(huì)做人：在校與老師同學(xué)和睦相處，互相幫助；在家......；在上學(xué)途中，遵守交通規(guī)則，能......；遇到困難時(shí)，能......
存在問(wèn)題	學(xué)習(xí)壓力（feel stressed in...）大，......（再舉1-2個(gè)例子）
目前想法	1）感謝…… 2）打算（怎樣處理存在的問(wèn)題）

要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Dad & Mum，
I will leave junior school and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like tell you what I have done in the past three years.
……
Yours Sincerely
Jim

Answer 1

【答案】I will leave junior school and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like tell you what I have learnt in the past three years.
I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills. I have learnt a lot of famous people all over the world. Spud's story tells us not to give up when we do anything. Tan Dun is a great musician. He said his music is to dream without boundaries. I can also get along with my teachers and classmates. We learn from each other and help each other， too. At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest. On my way to school， I can obey the traffic rules./I can help old men cross the road. When I meet difficulty， I can talk to my friends/teachers/you about it.
Now I feel stressed in my study. I can't get enough sleep/I have too much homework to do every day/I have no time for my hobbies.
I would thank you for taking good care of me and thank my teachers and friends for their help. I will plan my time well to study better and sleep well/ make my study and my body better.
Yours Sincerely
Jim
【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來(lái)時(shí)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題及注意事項(xiàng)。特別要注意主句是過(guò)去時(shí)從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，表示一種事實(shí)或真理在文中運(yùn)用。注意跟進(jìn)材料內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配問(wèn)題。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。