Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是Tom，是陽光中學(xué)的一名八年級(jí)學(xué)生。上周日你從報(bào)紙上看到觀鳥俱樂部（the Birdwatching Club）的招聘廣告。請(qǐng)你寫一封簡(jiǎn)短的應(yīng)聘信，介紹自己的情況(見下表)，表示愿意為俱樂部做一些工作，并請(qǐng)俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人考慮并盡早予以答復(fù)�？蛇m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫，80詞左右（不包括所給的開頭和結(jié)尾）。

Name	Tom	Age	15
School	Sunshine Secondary School	Personality	honest, humorous
Interests & Hobbies	English and science; love sports; enjoy traveling
Working experience	take care of animals write a report about how to protect wild animals last year
Reasons to join the club	1. … 2. …
Telephone number	010-8255668
Email address	tom@163.com

Dear Sir/Madam,

I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday. Now I’m writing to tell you that I’d like to join _____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday. Now I’m writing to tell you I’d like to join the Birdwatching Club.

I’m a 15-year-old student in Grade 8 at Sunshine secondary school. My favorite subjects are English and science. I love sports very much and enjoy traveling. I’m also an animal lover, so I love birds and nature very much. I can take care of animals. I wrote a report about how to protect wild animals last year for our school newspaper. I think it is very important for me to do something to protect birds. I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club. You can call me on 010-8255668 or e-mail me at tom@163.com. Best wishes.

Yours sincerely

Tom

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封應(yīng)聘信。由于給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說明有條理，準(zhǔn)確地闡明了自己基本愛好和特長(zhǎng)，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息，符合應(yīng)聘信的格式和要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，包含復(fù)合形容詞的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.如a 15-year-old student，I love sports very much and enjoy traveling . it is very important for me to do something學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。