Question

【題目】寫作（注意：文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實姓名、校名和師名，否則不得分）

假如你是John Smith, 下周六是你的生日，你邀請你的同學Jimmy參加你的生日聚會。你希望他早點到你家，并帶來一些音樂光碟。請根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一封邀請函。

Dear Jimmy,

John

話題作文：近來網(wǎng)絡上流行一句話：“世界上最遠的距離是我在你對面，你卻在看手機。”這句話真實反映了當前的社會現(xiàn)象，“手機控”，“低頭族”越來越多且呈年輕化趨勢。請你以“My opinion on using the mobile phone"為題針對這一現(xiàn)象發(fā)表個人觀點，并提出改進建議。

提示詞：a mobile phone freak 手機控

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jimmy,

Next Saturday is my birthday. I'll have a birthday party at home. I invite you to come to my birthday party. Can you come a little earlier? Please bring some music CDs. I'm sure we'll have a good time.

John

My opinion on using the mobile phones

Mobile phones are widely used these days. More and more people use mobile phones to do different kinds of things, such as chatting and shopping. But they spend too much time on the mobile phones. More and more mobile phone freaks appear. Not only the adults but also the children are members of them.

I don't think it's normal. Watching mobile phones too much is bad for our eyes. We have little time to exercise. It's not good for our health. We pay more attention to it. It influences our study and lives. We have less and less time to communicate with others.

In my opinion, we can do something meaningful instead of playing with the mobile phones all the time. Reading, exercising, visiting friends and communicating with families are also good ways to spend your free time.

I hope people can use the mobile phones correctly.

【解析】

亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如have a birthday party，at home，invite sb. to do，a little earlier，have a good time，these days，more and more，different kinds of things，such as，not only…but also，members of，too much，pay more attention to，less and less，communicate with others，instead of等。而More and more mobile phone freaks appear. / We have less and less time to communicate with others.等比較級結構和I'm sure we'll have a good time./ I hope people can use the mobile phones correctly.等賓語從句結構的運用，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。