Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你住在陽光社區(qū)，并且是社區(qū)負(fù)責(zé)人之一。你想寫一則通知，告訴居民你們組織了一個(gè)互助俱樂部，想幫助那些需要幫助的人。依據(jù)以下信息，完成短文，做適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

提示:1.我們俱樂部每周六下午召開一次會(huì)議;2.如果你身體不舒服，我們這兒有醫(yī)生護(hù)士;3.如果你家里的電器壞了.我們這兒有工程師;4如果你的孩子做作業(yè)有問題，我們這兒有大學(xué)生……

Dear all，

I am Simon, one of the leaders of our Sunshine community centre.

Come on, everybody! We are here waiting for you.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear all,

I am Simon, one of the leaders of our Sunshine community centre.

We usually have a "helping hands" meeting on Saturday afternoon. If you have come problems, you can come to us and let us know. Then we can give you some help.

If you are not feeling well these days, we have some good doctors and nurses here and they will make you feel well again. Is your washing machine or TV broken? Don't worry. Our engineers are ready to help. When your children have problems with their homework, the college students will help them. Also, if you don't know how to design your new home, the artists here will give you some good ideas.

Come on, everybody! We are here waiting for you.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者寫一則通知，告訴居民你們組織了一個(gè)互助俱樂部，想幫助那些需要幫助的人。小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如If you are not feeling well these days, we have some good doctors and nurses here and they will make you feel well again. When your children have problems with their homework, the college students will help them. Also, if you don't know how to design your new home, the artists here will give you some good ideas.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。