Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)所給圖畫，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇約80詞的短文。要求完整敘述圖畫內(nèi)容。

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Answer 1

【答案】

After school, Bob, Mike and Sarah were going home happily. On the way home, they saw a boy fell down on the ground. They asked him, and then they knew he was a student, too. He found it was very dirty here. He rode a bike to come here and wanted to clean it. After they heard this, they helped the boy stand up. They let him sit on the seat. Then they helped him clean the ground. After they saw it was very clean, they were all very happy.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者寫看圖作文，小作者首先要認(rèn)真看圖，明白圖中的意思。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如On the way home, they saw a boy fell down on the ground. After they saw it was very clean, they were all very happy.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。