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5．幸福是什么？幸福是父母為你營造的溫馨的家，幸福是老師望向你的贊許的目光，幸福是孤獨(dú)時(shí)朋友送來的一杯奶茶，幸福是…請(qǐng)以My happiness為話題，寫一件曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過的令你感到幸福的事情．
要求：條理清晰，語言流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確，字跡工整，80-100詞．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In fact，happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it．
句中"if you put your heart into it"為條件狀語從句，句中"in fact"意為"事實(shí)上"．這句話意為：事實(shí)上，如果你用心感受，幸福就在你身邊．
高分句型二：
Whenever I am in trouble，I can feel my parents'love．
句中"Whenever I am in trouble"為時(shí)間狀語從句，"be in trouble"意為"有困難"．這句話意為：無論任何時(shí)候我有困難，我都能感受到父母的愛．

解答 My happiness
Happiness is important in our life．In fact，happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it．【高分句型一】（點(diǎn)明主旨）
I will never forget one thing．Once，I had a bad mark at a math test．I was shy and afraid to meet my parents．But when I got back home late，my parents knew what happened，they said to me："It doesn't matter，my child．Remember we'll be always with you when you need help．We believe you can be better next time．Never give up!"I was moved andmade up my mind to work harder and harder．（回憶事情）
I feel happy．Whenever I am in trouble，I can feel my parents'love．【高分句型二】I want to be a good child for my parents．（升華主題）

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