Question

3．假如你是圖片中的人物，請你根據圖畫內容及所給提示，完成下面的日記．字數不少于20．

June 7th        Tuesday                                                   Sunny
I got up late this morning．My alarm clock didn't work．When I woke up，it was 7：10． So I washed my face quickly and run to the bus stop without breakfast． By the time I got there，I missed the school bus because it had already gone．So I had to walk to school．Finally，when I got to school，it was already 9：10． I was late for class． When the teacher asked for my homework．I found I had left it at home． What a bad day it was!
One possible version．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內容是根據圖示寫一篇日記，注意日記的格式．時態(tài)主要為一般過去時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
描述圖畫；7：10醒來，錯過校車，遲到，作業(yè)落在家里
常用到的重點短語：
get up 起床
wake up 醒來
be late for 遲到
by the time到…時候為止
【高分句型】
1．①So I washed my face quickly and run to the bus stop ②without breakfast．
①so表示所以，不能和because連用．
②without除了，沒有…，介詞，后加名詞代詞或動名詞．
2．①By the time I got there，I missed the school bus②because it had already gone．
①by the time到…時候為止，引導時間狀語從句．
②because引導的原因狀語從句．
3．①When the teacher asked for my homework．I found②I had left it at home．
①when引導的時間狀語從句
②found后是省略了that的賓語從句．

解答 June 7th        Tuesday                       Sunny
   I got up late this morning．My alarm clock didn't work．When I woke up，it was 7：10． So I washed my face quickly and run to the bus stop without breakfast．【高分句型】By the time I got there，I missed the school bus because it had already gone．【高分句型】So I had to walk to school．Finally，when I got to school，it was already 9：10． I was late for class． When the teacher asked for my homework．I found I had left it at home．（描述圖畫）【高分句型】What a bad day it was!（感想）

點評 本題實際是應用文寫作，所給材料是圖畫較為詳細，動筆前先要認真看懂圖畫確定寫作內容，注意不能遺漏要點．根據要點內容可知要用簡單句，包括主系表結構，主謂賓結構等．根據所給內容本文人稱主要是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般過去時態(tài)．寫作時要靈活運用，注意主謂一致，單詞拼寫正確，尤其要注意短文開頭結尾日記的書寫格式．