Question

8．根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示和要求，以"My Dream Job"為題寫一篇短文．
內(nèi)容提示：1．想成為一名記者；
 2．多讀書，勤寫作，向報刊、雜志投稿…；
 3．高中畢業(yè)后去北京上大學(xué)；
 4．想到電視臺工作，游祖國大好河山，觀世界風(fēng)云變幻；
 5．通過努力，夢想成真．
要求：1．條理清楚，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；
 2．可根據(jù)提示適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容；
 3．不少于80詞．
MyDreamJob
I like talking to people and asking them questions，so I want to be a journalist（reporter） when I grow up．The job is interesting but kind of dangerous．Now I'm going to do some more reading and writing and write articles for newspapers and magazines．I'm going to a university in Beijing after senior（high）school．Next I'm going to work for a TV station as a journalist（reporter）．Then I'm going to travel throughout China and all over the world．I think my dream will come true someday if I work hard．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I like talking to people and asking them questions，so I want to be a journalist（reporter） when I grow up．我喜歡和人交談，問他們問題，所以我長大后想當(dāng)一名記者．
本句是用連詞so連接的一個并列句，意為"因此，所以"，表結(jié)果；like doing sth固定用法，喜歡做某事；when在后一句中引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句，當(dāng)…的時候
高分句型二：
I think my dream will come true someday if I work hard．我想如果我努力，總有一天我會實現(xiàn)我的夢想．
I think 后跟了賓語從句作think的賓語，省略了引導(dǎo)詞that．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，時態(tài)遵循主將從現(xiàn)的原則．

解答 My Dream Job
I like talking to people and asking them questions，so I want to be a journalist（reporter） when I grow up．【高分句型一】【點題，想成為一名記者】The job is interesting but kind of dangerous．Now I'm going to do some more reading and writing and write articles for newspapers and magazines．【多讀書，勤寫作，向報刊、雜志投稿】I'm going to a university in Beijing after senior（high）school．【高中畢業(yè)后去北京上大學(xué)】Next I'm going to work for a TV station as a journalist（reporter）．Then I'm going to travel throughout China and all over the world．【想到電視臺工作，游祖國大好河山，觀世界風(fēng)云變幻；】I think my dream will come true someday if I work hard．【高分句型二】【總結(jié)全文，通過努力，夢想成真】

點評 本篇是一篇提綱作文，寫作時，切記逐句翻譯，寫作前，首先要理清思路，然后選用合適的詞或短語，讓文意更通順，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理．